I thought Connor's (Connor's Blog), Jeremy's (Jeremy's School Blog), and Charis' (Charis' Blog <3) papers were excellent. They all came across as very interesting when I started reading them. They have a lot of voice and facts.
I think that I meet my own requirement for excellence with my ideas for my life 20 years from now. I felt it was very imaginative and interesting yet still believable.
I don't meet my standards for excellence because by introduction is very attention grabbing. I also don't have much voice in my paper. I think it may be too factual.
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